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(10-02-2019, 07:46 PM)Krikor Wrote:(10-02-2019, 08:55 AM)Ofnuts Wrote: You may want to fix the problems first: "..."
The water is overflowing on the bottom right corner.
The idea of water overflowing (in the right corner) until it's interesting. There could even be a water stain on the wood in that part, enhancing that effect.
Water overflowing is voluntary. The wood may not be level. The idea of an overflow of water is interesting. Why not a little waterfall .....
(10-02-2019, 08:55 AM)Ofnuts Wrote: You may want to fix the problems first:Water overflowing is voluntary.
- The iPhone is blurred when the wood remains in focus.
- The perspective of the planks and the iPhone don't really match
- The water is overflowing on the bottom right corner.
- iPhone and puffin assume the light is from behind the viewer while the wood as the light from above and the girl has the light from the back.
But not shadow's problems...